Cover Letter Tip of the Day

Don't make this your opening line.

To Whom it May Concern:

I would very much like to apply for the above position,in fact since I have had a lot of friends, mentors, family members, confidants and business leaders advising and training me through out the years from my earliest days setting up internships in high school and college, as well as very specific training and a natural sales ability second to none through out my life and career in our particular and very specific field and that is why I am that much further ahead when it comes to this very specific position, I feel this position would be the best possible position for me since nobody in the business world knows the market or the product for that matter better than I do.

Yes, you read it right. It's one sentence. He lost me at "in fact since."


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